Yes, a rabbit. The rabbit made its entrance into the story this way:
“A
rabbit hopped nonchalantly across the clearing as if it was not strange
at all for a spaceship to be there…. As Sara and Charles disappeared
into the woods, the rabbit hopped up to the ramp. It sat erect for a
moment, glancing this way and that. Then the rabbit darted up the ramp.”
Originally,
the rabbit was just a rabbit, hopping through the clearing, when Sara
and Charles were in the spaceship. My sisters thought it was strange for
the rabbit to think nothing of the spaceship, so I started to wonder if
there was more to the rabbit than I had at first thought. I decided
that I would look out for a purpose for this rabbit, and if it didn’t
have one, I would take it out. Well, the rabbit is still there. He has a
purpose, though you have to look out for a specific paragraph to find
out what it is. This paragraph is at the very end of chapter eleven. I
did try to bring the rabbit into the end of the story, but it was
awkward and disrupted the whole ending. Nevertheless, the rabbit is
important, and, well, who doesn’t like a rabbit in a story?
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